These are my first tries with the type of peotry called "Haiku". I am not that well familiar with it so you will have to excuse me if I didn't do well ^-^
Waves of the sea
Wrestle the warm winds
Sadness washed away
Naked trees
And beds of snow
But hearts are warm
Her cold breath
Warm on my face
Like scent of a rose
16 comments:
Hey you did really good job with haiku
I always have hard time to figure out if my haiku are 5-7-5
Thank you for bringing haiku to your blog...
Nasra:
Thanks :D
And about the 5-7-5 I really didn't care about it since I read that in English it is ok to ignore it because it is hard to achieve while in Japanes it is a must!
Thank you for reading them :D
I am not familiar with this Haikus style!!! First I thought its a japanese word!!!!
ya salam 3ala el Haiku :p
Well I don't know what Haiku is; But those words were really soft and nice :)
Embarak 3alaik el shahar...very nice poem...I liked it...hope you're doing well and Happy Ramadaning to you and your family..
Salted-Caramel:
Allah ybarek feech and kel 3am o enty eb khair :))
Namika:
Yeah it is a Japanese form of poetry! I am not that well familiar with it too but it is interesting and has some rules. Read more about it; it is interesting :)
Flamingoliya:
Thanks and ya salam 3aleech ba3ad :D
True Faith:
I guess by now you know what it is ;)
Thanks for the nice comment :)
Samboosa:
THANKS!! :D
DayDreamer:
Well then try to do so! And in Japanese too ;)
I am sure you will do well :)
Thanks!
MissCosmoKuwait:
Allah ybarek feech :D
Thanks.. I am doing fine al7amdillah and happy Ramdaning to you too and your family everywhere ;)
Jawaher:
Happy Ramadan to you too and I am glad that the blogs are unblocked there now :D
Nice! I think I like this kind of poetry better! But maybe you need to add a The in the last verse? The scent. Never heard of Haiku! Tell me more! Oh yeah, and mbarak 3alaik el shahar ;)
it's interseting to try different forms of poetry, and you've done a well job with haiku..
Mbark 3leek alshahar
:)
I love haiku as they seem to make you think ...
Did you read mine in nasra-al-adawi.blogspot.com
what did you think of it..
Peach:
Try it then ;)
And yeah I think I need an a not the before scent! Thanks for pointing that out ;)
I will tell you more later :P
mbarak 3aleena wo 3aleech ;)
Meeshosaur:
Allah ybarek feeki :D
Read more about it! It is interesting! And try it and let us see ;)
Faith:
Thanks and I am waiting to see what you can do with it ;)
~Se3loah~:
Nice nick :P
Mbarak 3aleeni wo 3aleeki :)
Nasra:
Yeah I read them and well there is this condition of having a word that indicate a season was missing from them I guess!
No one writes better haikus than my friend Amunki. migrantmind@blogspot.com
She's funny, sensitive yet sharp!
Here is a Haiku for you:
5 7 5 Say it
Bring in Something Natural
End it with a punch
Mama Fusla:
Yeah I have seen her blog before :D
That rule of 5 7 5 will be a headache for me if I tried to apply it :P
5 7 5 Say it
Bring in Something Natural
End it with a punch
That was a Haiku :)
Mama Fusla:
:D
I know it is a haiku! Don't you think it will be a shame for me writing some haikus and not recognizing them? And I know the 5 7 5 rule apply to it too. Unless I am not good in counting the syllables :P
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