Monday, October 03, 2005

Haikus

These are my first tries with the type of peotry called "Haiku". I am not that well familiar with it so you will have to excuse me if I didn't do well ^-^

Waves of the sea
Wrestle the warm winds
Sadness washed away


Naked trees
And beds of snow
But hearts are warm


Her cold breath
Warm on my face
Like scent of a rose

21 comments:

iamnasra said...

Hey you did really good job with haiku

I always have hard time to figure out if my haiku are 5-7-5

Thank you for bringing haiku to your blog...

Hopeless Poet said...

Nasra:
Thanks :D

And about the 5-7-5 I really didn't care about it since I read that in English it is ok to ignore it because it is hard to achieve while in Japanes it is a must!

Thank you for reading them :D

Salted-Caramel said...

Mbarak 3alayk ilshahar.

Namika said...

I am not familiar with this Haikus style!!! First I thought its a japanese word!!!!

Flamingoliya said...

ya salam 3ala el Haiku :p

True Faith said...

Well I don't know what Haiku is; But those words were really soft and nice :)

samboose said...

Good JOB!!!

A Daydreamer said...

i learned about haikus in my japanese class but i never attempted to write any... but you did a good job... short & sweet :)

MissCosmoKuwait said...

Embarak 3alaik el shahar...very nice poem...I liked it...hope you're doing well and Happy Ramadaning to you and your family..

jawaher said...

good to read and learn sth new ...happy ramadan 2 u :D

Hopeless Poet said...

Salted-Caramel:
Allah ybarek feech and kel 3am o enty eb khair :))

Namika:
Yeah it is a Japanese form of poetry! I am not that well familiar with it too but it is interesting and has some rules. Read more about it; it is interesting :)

Flamingoliya:
Thanks and ya salam 3aleech ba3ad :D

True Faith:
I guess by now you know what it is ;)
Thanks for the nice comment :)

Samboosa:
THANKS!! :D

DayDreamer:
Well then try to do so! And in Japanese too ;)
I am sure you will do well :)
Thanks!

MissCosmoKuwait:
Allah ybarek feech :D
Thanks.. I am doing fine al7amdillah and happy Ramdaning to you too and your family everywhere ;)

Jawaher:
Happy Ramadan to you too and I am glad that the blogs are unblocked there now :D

Peach said...

Nice! I think I like this kind of poetry better! But maybe you need to add a The in the last verse? The scent. Never heard of Haiku! Tell me more! Oh yeah, and mbarak 3alaik el shahar ;)

Meeshosaur said...

mobark 3leek al shahr ..
really its 1st time to heard of it .. it looks so pretty .. i like it ..
i think i have bad tring with it .. lol
good job man .. :D

Faith said...

it's interseting to try different forms of poetry, and you've done a well job with haiku..

~ se3loah ~ said...

Mbark 3leek alshahar
:)

iamnasra said...

I love haiku as they seem to make you think ...

Did you read mine in nasra-al-adawi.blogspot.com

what did you think of it..

Hopeless Poet said...

Peach:
Try it then ;)
And yeah I think I need an a not the before scent! Thanks for pointing that out ;)
I will tell you more later :P
mbarak 3aleena wo 3aleech ;)

Meeshosaur:
Allah ybarek feeki :D
Read more about it! It is interesting! And try it and let us see ;)

Faith:
Thanks and I am waiting to see what you can do with it ;)

~Se3loah~:
Nice nick :P
Mbarak 3aleeni wo 3aleeki :)

Nasra:
Yeah I read them and well there is this condition of having a word that indicate a season was missing from them I guess!

Mama Fusla said...

No one writes better haikus than my friend Amunki. migrantmind@blogspot.com

She's funny, sensitive yet sharp!
Here is a Haiku for you:

5 7 5 Say it
Bring in Something Natural
End it with a punch

Hopeless Poet said...

Mama Fusla:
Yeah I have seen her blog before :D
That rule of 5 7 5 will be a headache for me if I tried to apply it :P

Mama Fusla said...

5 7 5 Say it
Bring in Something Natural
End it with a punch

That was a Haiku :)

Hopeless Poet said...

Mama Fusla:
:D
I know it is a haiku! Don't you think it will be a shame for me writing some haikus and not recognizing them? And I know the 5 7 5 rule apply to it too. Unless I am not good in counting the syllables :P