Friday, September 23, 2005

I Have Not Lost The Passion

Here is one of my latest poems that I have written in less than 2 hours! So enjoy :D


I Have Not Lost the Passion

I have not lost the passion yet
To have a walk along the beach
And to enjoy the romantic sunset
To dream about walking on the clouds
Even if they are out of my reach
And I am lost among the crowds

I have not lost the passion to smile
To a strange kid passing by
Or to a newly wed walking down the aisle
And to laugh or tell a joke
Sometimes to cry
And with my tears I choke

I have not lost my passion for you
And I never will
And to love you all my life through
To cherish every moment we spent
Together and we still
Forever to each other we were meant

25 comments:

iamnasra said...

Indeed you did not loose ur touch in romance I must say...

Loved it totally

Hopeless Poet said...

Nasra:
Thank god I did not :D
Thanks for the comment :)

samboose said...

Ok this is not a good day for me to read something like this. i'm already extra emotional.

As usual great post an I was wondering when you'll get the time to post something new!!

Spontaneousnessity said...

eeeh allah kareem =}

Hopeless Poet said...

Samboosa:
Allah y3eenich but you are tough enough ;)

Thanks and I know I was lazy with the posts! I was not in the mood!

Spontana:
Yeah Allah kareem! :D

tequila69 said...

Happy very late 27th Birthday :D

Hopeless Poet said...

Tiquila69:
Thanks a and better late than never ;)

Faith said...

you seem not to have lost your passion for your poems too.. :)

Brava Valentia said...

heart breaker !!

but have u ever tried to write about something other than love ?

A Daydreamer said...

mashalah mashallah.... very nice for a "quickie" poem :)

i love the "smile to a child or a newly wed going down the isle" part the most... very sweet...

PS: miss you tons!

Blossom said...

You still have the passion , but you made me loose mine and give it up !

Hopeless Poet said...

Faith:
Thanks and don't lose your passion for reading my poems ;)

Mother Courage:
I am a heart breaker? why? :(

Yeah I have and you can see some of them in the blog too!

DayDreamer:
Thanks :D

Blossom:
How did I made you lose theh passion and give it up? :|

Blossom said...

Hmm, I don't know I think I will lose it or I already did ...dunno :P


Don't worry it has nothing to do with you

Spontaneousnessity said...

ee walla happy belated birthday! 3asal il .. dancing things ili bel previous post! hehe

Starry Night said...

To dream about walking on the clouds
Even if they are out of my reach


the whole poem is full of passion..and i loved it..specially those two lines..

Hopeless Poet said...

Blossom:
Well you said that I made you lose it! :( Read your comment again :P
But I think you can regain it if you want and maybe I can help :P

Spontana:
LOOL thanks :D
Yeah they are nice! I wish I can dance like that :P

Starry Night:
Thanks and welcome in my blog :D
By the way, your nick's taken from the song Vincent right? :D

Starry Night said...

yeah :)

i love this song..

actually.. i love all groban's songs :P

Hopeless Poet said...

Starry Night:
I have the original version for Don Mclean and I am not sure if I heard Groban's version! Though I like "You raise me up" and "Remember when it rained" :D

BaSSeM said...

I think this is the first time I posted a comment on your site..

I must say that I love this poem and I might as well say, I loved all of your poems. i think that you're a very talented writer.

Keep up the good work

PS. Happy birthday although it's too late

jawaher said...

nice poem hopeless poet but is it to show us that u get older but ur inside is still younger :P .....adfa3 1/2 3omri just if i know who the girl that hopeless poet loves and sends these lovely poems 2 ;)

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Hopeless Poet said...

Bassem:
That is true, it is the 1st time so welcome in :D

Thanks for the nice words about my poems :$
And thanks for the happy birthday wish :D

Jawaher:
Thanks :D
There is no girl that I love or send the poems to so you can keep your half age :P

Mochness:
Welcome in my blog :D
I love the sea too! I love the sound of water!
Thanks :D

Sowhat said...

printed amd hanged in my notice board .. hope that you dont mind ?? really nice one ..

et i feel i lost the passion sometimes..

Peach said...

I like, I like ;D HP this is one of your best so far!

Hopeless Poet said...

Sowhat:
That is so nice of you! I am flattered! Thanks and happy to see you in my blog!

Peach:
Thanks thanks :D I am glad you think it is :D