Monday, February 14, 2005

Valentine's Day

Yes! It is that day. Lovers' day, but it is not my day!
And as the Hopeless Poet that I am, I decided to write a hopeless poem so if you are in a happy mood and you don't want to ruin it, I advice you not to continue reading.

Valentine's Day

Here it comes again and nothing new

Same as last year and the year before


If red is today's color then why am I feeling blue

The hurt is so deep and I can no longer ignore

I tried to so hard to shed a tear or two


And I asked my eyes "what are you waiting for"

"Why are my tears not coming through"?

They sadly answered, "You have no tears anymore"


If you were happy and the poem made you sad then I can say that I did my job very well :P

30 comments:

Vintage said...

i have two comments.

first is an observation: ive yet to meet a blogger who actually enjoyed valintine, i had a valintine date. and i enjoyed it,

second: lovely poem, but i want to know how can we define poem syncronization.. is it always with word endings.. cz if u notice my last poem.. its not like ur pattern.. i dont know, just a thought.

Aquamarine said...

ur suffering from dry eyes.

Hopeless Poet said...

Vintage:

The bloggers society is very sad. They are all broken hearted :p
You had a Valentin date? give us the details then :p

Thanx. These are called rhymes. There are different types of rhymes but I always use the ending rhyme. Actually I can't write a poem like what you have done. The rhyming process runs in my blood!

Aquamarine:

Yeah probably! Last time I tried to really cry (which was not today) nothing came out! I guess I need to see a specialist :p

Hope said...

I don't know but I think you will hate me for this comment, but I don't believe in Valentines day!!

I think its just like any other day and people exaggerate over the occasion. It's corporations that created this whole chaos to increase their profits. Im sure what St. Valentines really meant is to celebrate love everyday with our loved ones and encourage marriage.

mydream said...

:( my eyes answerd "we got used to it"

Hopeless Poet said...

Hope:

No I wouldn't hate you. I don't believe in it too. I just made it an excuse to write and new sad poem to share the sadness with so many lonely people and to ruin the joy for those with lovers :p

mydream:

well you can lend me some of your tears then :p

Anonymous said...

peal some onions :p

flamingoliya

Aquamarine said...

hopeless that's sad.. hmm. not even a single tear? something must be wrong! can i help? :P

Hopeless Poet said...

Flamingoliya:

You have ruined my moment of sadness! Now I am smiling! Thanx very much :p

Aquamarine:

I don't know! Maybe I am dry inside and I need to drink more than 8 glasses of water daily :p

Aquamarine said...

lol! yes, maybe that's it! in that case, drink a few extra glasses. that should make u cry!

Bare Feet said...

its cuz.. its not hurt ur feeling.. its anger

Hopeless Poet said...

Bare Feet:

Actually it is neither hurt not anger. It is indescribable feeling, beyond comprehension emotions and undefind mood.

Vintage said...

i cant. my oldest sister reads my blog,

Hopeless Poet said...

You should tell only me then :p

Vintage said...

i just told u didnt i ? i got rejected on valintines eve, and went on a date on the day.

Hopeless Poet said...

ok! i am not that smart but when did you tell me about you being rejected? forget about this now

regarding the poem "syncronization" as you called it, i found a good article related to rhymes and so on i can send it to you if you like.

Vintage said...

if ur free come to my chatter box in my site plz.

Hopeless Poet said...

I am free somehow, but the chatterbox is blocked since it is linked to a chatting site. The company has blocked chatting and most message boards in it's network. :(

Aquamarine said...

looking forward to ur next song on monday ;)

Hopeless Poet said...

Aquamarine:
I hope I don't disappoint you and post a song that you will totally hate :P

Aquamarine said...

laa i don't think so. u got good taste. ;)

jawaher said...

wonerffffffffffffffffffffful....i love it soooooooo much..i feel its my poem.......... its my favorite now

Hopeless Poet said...

Jawaher:
Thanks for the lovely comment :)

jawaher said...

hi: hopless sorry but I really love this poem ...i sent it to my friend ...he is mexican poet he said its wounderful and cooooooooooool ...he has wounderful poems I can send them 2 u if u want .....

Hopeless Poet said...

Jawaher:
Thanks for the free da3aya :D
And yeah why not .. send his poems to me and let me read them and see and if you have your own poems send them too :D

She6anah said...

Hi =),,
I have a few things to say:
1st, if you like end rhymes then so be it, but I think a poet should try out different styles just to know what he/she's good at. I am taking poetry lessons and I found that there are some feelings that cannot be brought out in rhymes, so ther are a few other ways to write a wonderful poem without the annoyance of finding the right rhyme =),,
2nd, st. Valentine didn't mean to make it a day, he just died =p,, but to my info not on the 14th of Feb, it was earlier I guess, but all the people who believed in st. Valentine (@ his time, the people who he married) made the 14th a day to remember him.
Now, I think that with time this day was maybe forgotten or wasn't really important until corporations as Hope said decided to save it =p So, I do agree with Hope ;)

3rd, we should celebrate love whenever we can, yes. And I hate VD too =p because this day might not be a big deal to those who are already in a relationship or married... etc. My point is, VD IS THERE TO BUG SINGLE PEOPLE & MAKE THEM FEEL LEFT OUT!! =D

Sorry for saying too much =p
Nice poem man! Hehe,,

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