Sunday, January 28, 2007

Two Hearts

Enjoy my latest poem! ;)

Two Hearts

It is a poem written in blood
For romance has come to an end
Two hearts lost in the flood
Two hearts impossible to mend

Stories of love we have read before
Where most have been a success
Two hearts broken and nothing more
Two hearts were beating in a mess

Lovers come and lovers go
And time does not wait for anyone
Two hearts they did not know
Two hearts they were; and now they are none

14 comments:

Gloomy said...

wow I dont know what to say, it is so beautiful, so full of meaning and emotions.

MishMisha said...

amazing is the only word that comes to mind right now :)

Breeze said...

qJust YAAAY !! ;)

Nice SHot :D ..
keep it up :)

iNouf said...

This is so yjeeb al9ya7 :(
it's really beautiful
I wish I could sing it (==Mary j.blige bs mtla6mmah :D

no seriously correct ur tongue (F) :p

بغالة حوشي said...

lovely said :D ur talented

Hopeless Poet said...

Gloomy:
Thanks very much! You made me blush :$ :P

Mishmisha:
Thanks very much and happy to see a comment from you here :D

Breeze:
I will keep it up :D Thanks ;)

Nouf:
Mary J. Blige? ma dawartee ela hathi? :P
And correct your body (F) lool

بغالة حوشي :
Welcome in and thanks for the comment! And what's up with your blog? I can't see anything there!

Anonymous said...

its amazing lots of pain wish to read peom with more bright feelings :) best wishes dear . P--Z

Hopeless Poet said...

P--Z:
Thanks and inshallah soon I will post one with bright feelings whenever I finish writing it.

True Faith said...

If one they were; things would've been different.

Honey™ said...

Lovers come and lovers go
And time does not wait for anyone
Two hearts they did not know
Two hearts they were; and now they are none


Loved That Part The Most ,, Amazing !

ReD Lady™ said...

wooooow ;)

i like it ..

Ghasheema said...

wow...very creative and good choice of words...it touched my heart

guess ur not so hopeless after all :)

Hopeless Poet said...

True Faith:
Yeah it will be a total different poem :P

Honey:
Thanks for your comment :$

Red Lady:
Welcome in my blog and thanks :D

Ghasheema:
Welcome in here. I am still hopeless :P and thanks very much

Anonymous said...

That is such a good poem. I think you stole my idea...i was gonna write a poem like that. :) but you did xactly what i had in mind. I love it. :)