Sunday, February 11, 2007

The Long Road

Here is a new poem that I actually finished sometime ago!

The Long Road

It is just you and me in a long never-ending road
Carrying nothing but our dreams
It is a long journey, and a heavy load
And the road grows longer as it seems

Here we stand alone in the middle of nowhere
Surrounded by walls of emptiness
Right in between hope and despair
I know we can come through, we can escape this wilderness

Hand in hand, let us follow the light
It will lead us so we shall never go astray
And save we will be, from all the spite
That was planted all over our way

25 comments:

true faith said...

I like so much that I don't know what to comment !

ReD Lady™ said...
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ReD Lady™ said...

very nice ;)

keeeeeep going nice work ;)

gooooooood luck

Spanish Guitar said...

It's so lovely keep going wish you the best my dearest

Gloomy said...

Splendid is the first word I thought of. You are a poet by nature, and trust me ana mo ga3da ajamel, I'm telling the truth.
I've noticed some change in your blog beside the Cbox. There is something missing, what is it? I don’t know. Me and my bad memory :'(

Ghasheema said...

Every word to it somehow relates to my current stage in life...I just hope the light at the end of the tunnel is real and not just a mirage

I guess poet really is ur last name :)

Ghasheema said...

Every word to it somehow relates to my current stage in life...I just hope the light at the end of the tunnel is real and not just a mirage

I guess poet really is ur last name :)

Bal8ees said...

mn jd marrah marrah 7elo
so touching :)

MishMisha said...

it's fantastic! i love it!

Fo0f said...

heh, man.. 2 poems in a row, that seems gloomy to me 8(

Glow! said...

This is the 1st time that I really read a poem of urz! & it's great! u really know how to do it!
I've tried once to write a poem some time ago in the college...... .& it SUX! loool La wallah wasn't that bas as a 1st attempt & the teacher gave me a good mark!
but ma sha2 Allah dude u r good!
i'm becoming a regular reader! ;)

eshda3wa said...

Amazing
keep it up

LiLaCs said...

I dont understand poems..So i'll refrain from commenting:P Bas laish you like country music?!?!? Its like sooo country..

Deem said...

Impressive words :)

Brava Valentia said...

i take the short road and the easiest way out =(

love it!!

do you write arabic poetry? if so why don't you dedicate another blog for those poems?

have you thought of publishing? i know i've asked this several times..but you never game a direct answer ;-p

Brava Valentia said...

game = gave

typo

Hopeless Poet said...

True Faith:
Thanks :$ You made me blush that I don't know what to reply :D

Red Lady:
Thanks :D And inshallah I will keep going till I stop lol :P

Spanish Guitar:
Thanks and wish you the best too

Gloomy:
:$ You made me blush with your nice words :D
And yeah you have a good eyes ;) There is nothing missing but I changed the order of the things on the left! I brought My Profile link to the top :D

Ghasheema:
I hope you find the light soon :D
And you are not a ghasheema after all ;)

Bal8ees:
Thanx for your comment :D

Mishmisha:
Thanks very much :D

Fo0f:
I can't think of anything except poems to post .. sorry :P

Glow:
First time?? You have been in my blog long time and this is your 1st time? Shame shame :P
You should keep trying and I would like to read that poem of yours ;)

Eshda3wa:
Thanks and I will keep it up till I get it down :P

Lilacs:
It is a long story why I like country! I used to not like it before but one day I was near the sea and opened the radio and there was a country song and I liked the whole scene so I started loving that music! I like their lyrics I think it is more clean that rap or the current pop songs! And maybe I can relate to their life style. I mean small towns and so on! I think there are some ethics in their songs.

Deem:
Welcome to my blog! And thanks :D

Brave Valentia:
I prefer the short roads too whenever possible .. so don't be sad as long as it is the right road ;)
And I have tried to write Arabic but I couldn't! Two lines and I stop! I don't know why :(
And yes I am thinking of publishing but when I don't know and I think this is your 1st time to ask me that unless you asked when you had your other nickname!

iNouf said...

SOGOOWWWWI o_O !

i luved the last part :(

dude u'r talented mshallah ;)
& when u publish ur poetry-book plz dun forget 2 mention my name
{== ga66ah mn glb :s

TorturedLady said...

Your poem is really amazing , i enjoyed reading it =)

Honey™ said...

Hand in hand, let us follow the light
It will lead us so we shall never go astray
And save we will be, from all the spite
That was planted all over our way


that part just gave me a huge hope ,, i love the poem

nice work ;)

بنت الديــــره said...

خاطره عجيبه الى مزيد من الابداع

:)

SwaRwaR said...

wooow ma shallah !!
veery kool :)
keep up the good job

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Hopeless Poet said...

Nouf:
In what page you want your name to be mentioned? Page 0? :P
Thanx :D

TorturedLady:
Thanx and welcome to my blog :)

Honey™:
I am glad that it did :D
Thanx :)

بنت الديــــره:
Welcome in my blog and thank you very much :D

SwaRwaR:
Thanx and I will keep it up :D

Princess Coffee Lover:
Yeah I am single! :P
And thanx :$

duanef said...

I really enjoyed this piece. I look forward to reading more of your poetry.