Sunday, March 06, 2005

Beauty of the Night

This week I have a course in Windows XP Implementation and so on and the PCs there are not connected to the Internet, so most of the time I am fighting sleeping or playing hearts or solitaire and I actually won in solitaire today, maybe for the first time in my life ever :P
So, I thought and I told myself why don't I write a poem instead of just sleeping or playing. I opened the notepad and wrote this romantic piece :P

It is called "Beauty of the Night"

The sublime beauty of the night
With the bright stars up in the sky
The soft beams of the moonlight
They dance for you and I

So we get lost in this silence
And melt ourselves with the night
We forget all our sadness
And start dancing with delight

Slowly we step on the ground
You hold my hand and take control
And you move me round and round
As you dance with my body, heart and soul

And we keep dancing under the starry sky
To the music that only us can hear
And we share the same sigh
Until the dawn draws near

I softly whisper in your ear
And tell you what you mean to me
Words of love you so long to hear
And how you made me the man I ought to be


15 comments:

mydream said...

:~)

Najah said...

Wonderful piece mashallah. Perfect words, i loved re-reading the first verses and the last one. Very talented, and ya keep openning the note pad instead of playing and instead of posting twice a week!!! (twice a day will be Great)

Hope said...

Beautiful poem!

iamnasra said...

I saw the name it was all poetry..for me wanting to read other blog of poetry or meet poets so I can learn from them too...

I was touched with your poem greatly and it left me wanting to write ....let us what will come out of me....

iamnasra said...

I saw the name it was all poetry..for me wanting to read other blog of poetry or meet poets so I can learn from them too...

I was touched with your poem greatly and it left me wanting to write ....let us see what will come out of me....

Flamingoliya said...

this is unbelievable! i dreamt that you posted a poem, and you did!!!
nice one. how long did it take you to write it? :)

Vintage said...

flamingoleya.. let me try and get if i totally understood ur english...

u dreamt that he posted a poem ............



what are the odds of a poet posting a poem .... hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm :p

Flamingoliya said...

vintage
1. he doesn't post much.
2. he posts lyrics on monday.
3. so the poem wasn't expected.

Aquamarine said...

okay everyone, listen up! i have made a decision! i need to get myself a poet!

its not fair! abee chithi! ;(

Hopeless Poet said...

mydream:
:)))
And post something in your blog!!

Najah:
Thanks :D
And yeah I started writing one in notepad today but I didn't finish it yet.. and twice a day is too much :p

hope:
Thanks :)

nasra:
Well after reading a little in your blog and I did a search in google using your name, I think I will be the one learning from you :)

Hopeless Poet said...

Flamingoliya:
Are you sure it was a dream or a nightmare? :P
Well it took me about half a day which is a short period compared to most of the poems I wrote before.

vintage:
The odds for me? They are very little :P
As you can see I can barely post 2 posts a week and one of them is actually copy and paste!

Flamingoliya:
Thank you for being a devoted fan of my blog :P
You are right, and the reason that the song is posted late is because I have a course and I have no access to the Internet.

Aquamarine:
You made me laugh :D
If you can get a poet then be one ;)
You can write many poems about yourself :P

Vintage said...

flamingoleya.. got it :)


hopeless .. well i like that song of the week idea.. i cant do that since i listen to the same cd since i bought my car :)

Hopeless Poet said...

Vintage:
Change the car then! :P

Aquamarine said...

mabi! i am too lazy to write a poem.

iamnasra said...

This is really romantic song...I think I have forgot all about it..it touched me reading it now