Friday, November 13, 2009

Don't..

This is an old poem that I wrote and was waiting to be finished but after reading twice tonight I have decided that there's no need to write more in it. I think the meaning is complete!


Don't let me open my eyes
I can see better when they're closed
Don't wake me up from my sleep
I have my life there to keep
Where reality has been exposed
And all the beauty that never dies

14 comments:

Aafke said...

Beatiful poem!

MuSe said...

Don't wake me up from my sleep
I have my life there to keep.

speaking about my life, huh ??

nice poem :)

RainDrop said...

ya salam 3alaik!
it really didnt need to b completed

msha3erha said...

Nice words to start my day with :D
Meaninful!

Missy said...

beautiful x

Missy
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jack bespoke said...

so talented, cant stop looking through your blog!

bespok.com

Standy said...

its already completed...
amazing!

Hopeless Poet said...

Aafke:
Thanks :)

MuSe:
No about my life :D And thanks :)

RainDrop:
Ya salam 3aleech enty :D

msha3erha:
Glad you started your day with my poem :D

Missy:
Thanks and sorry for not commenting back in your blog since I am not that much into fashion lool

jack bespoke:
Thanks and please keep looking! :)

Standy:
Thank you very much :)

Broken¤String said...

soo deep
i love it

Kazeh said...

Short, yet passionate... brilliant!

Simple Gurl said...

Short yet deep !

Luved it ;D

nosa said...

true.. this is beautiful as it is..

damn i loved it! lool

Renaissance Girl said...

This is beautiful! It's meanginful without being long,it's short and sweet and makes a statement. Lovely :)

turk girl said...

i liked your poem
write poems 2
i m waiting 4 u in my blog
let's know each other wellsms