My poem today talks about "Love" which I think the only thing in my life that always goes wrong :D
I am starting to hate love and I mean the love between a man and a woman not the other types of love! :P
So enjoy reading and I am sure many will relate to the poem which I started writing long ago but just finished it today ;)
Love
Love, how can it be defined
Ruled by the heart or the mind
Opens your eyes or makes you blind
Heaven or hell that you may find
You will never know when to fall
And you lose yourself control
And the changes in your heart and soul
And your willingness to give it all
The nights you spend all awake
Thinking if it is right or a big mistake
The things you will do for the other's sake
The eternal happiness or the heartbreak
Love is that indescribable feeling
It is the pure air, which you are inhaling
When you are sick, it has the healing
The compass that guide you when you are sailing
It gives you wings when you need to fly
And builds castles up in the sky
It makes you laugh and makes you cry
And it makes your tears run dry
Love is that what mends a broken heart
And keeps it safe from all the spite
Even if it is love that broke that heart in the start
Only God knows how many will be broken tonight
28 comments:
"It gives you wings when you need to fly
And builds castles up in the sky
It makes you laugh and makes you cry"
I want that ...
:) well done HP.. and since I didn't post a certain line that means I like the whole poem.. Nice poem about love.. But how can you write such a poem and say that you hate love..
True Faith:
If you want that then you have to fall in love ;)
Namika:
Oh finally :P
But wait!! I thought that when you mention certain lines, that you like the poem but you like those lines more! But now I guess you meant that you just liked those lines and hated the rest :(
I am starting to hate love because it was never unfair to me and I almost lost my patience for it :@
HP : don't think about love that much ..u don't even have 2 ask urself about love or define it ..u know what hp??( u will fill in love when KUCH KUCH HOTA HAI :))..i hope u will understand that ok?/
The nights you spend all awake
Thinking if it is right or a big mistake
The things you will do for the other's sake
The eternal happiness or the heartbreak
.... *speechless*
excellent poem hp.
wow, great poem
now now Hp, don't go on assuming things :p i never said I didn't like your poems.. if I didn't like them I wouldn't have been checking your blog now would I ;)
Boy that sounds freeky ;) You make Love sound so heavenly and devilish all at the same time. tif tif tif el shar barra o b3eed no love for us easily hurt dreamers! Only the love of a child ;)
Jawaher:
I don't mean to think about love! It lives in my mind :P
And yeah for sure I will fall in love "when something happens" ;)
Salted-Caramel:
Thanks and you are a good reader ;)
*bigger smile* :D
Enigma:
Thanks man and I am glad that you liked it :D
No:
Thanks and welcome in my blog :)
Namika:
Oh glad I was wrong then ;)
And you are right and it is an honor that you are one of the loyal readers of this humble blog :D
DayDreamer:
Thanks :D
You don't hate love when you are in it, you hate it when it passes you by!
Now I wrote a poem about it and hopefully it will be satisfied and it comes my way again ;) ya3ni you can say I am bribing it ;)
Peach:
Hala wallah! Where have you been? :O
And yes it is that way! A moment you are high in the sky and the next you are down on the ground!
Let us see you again around!
Pink sHoKoLaa:
ilsanich el a9a7 :D
Maybe you could have said it better if you tried ;)
And yes it gives you a meaning for life and makes you wanna be a better person :)
been hiding ;p lol but inshallah i won't hide so long again ;)
aaaaaaah this is really reallly cute, I dont know how reallly love can make you feeel but i think it does the above! wonderfull poem!
HP
I should read this one to "Bu Habbash" :P
Very well written :)
Nice poem, guess it's all about taking a chance, we never know where or how it will end.
It's warm and beautiful...
sorry , u got zero hopeless ....its a good translation , but i dont want u 2 replace the words from one language to the other one ..i want u 2 know the mening beyond the words ..this is the way excellent translators and excellent lovers do ...so ( kuch kuch hota hai hp , u will not understand )
Peach:
That is good to hear! But god knows you seem to be a moody person :P
Najah:
Wow! It's been like long since I have seen a comment for you in my blog! Welcome back ;)
And love will make you feel like that yes and even more! Thanks for your comment :)
RD:
Why should you read it to him? He does not know how to read? :P
Thanks and I hope bu habash likes it too :P
Autumn Storm:
Welcome in :)
Well it is either will work or it will not work I guess :P
You have a nice nick by the way :)
Sandy:
Thanks and glad you enjoyed reading it :)
Cheers and welcome in :D
Ancient:
Thanks for passing by and reading the poem :)
Jawaher:
Nobody said that I am a good translator but it is not fair that I got 0 :(
So why don't you enlighten me and the readers of the meaning beyond those words? :D
hp : u will know the meaning later ...but i feel u dont want 2 know anything :) ...sorry hp u got zero cos i dont like cheaters :)
Love needs patience in the heart.. If you lose it, you'll never get far.. Be patient HP :)
Beautifully written..
"Love is that what mends a broken heart
And keeps it safe from all the spite
Even if it is love that broke that heart in the start" .. Liked the idea of these lines :)
Thank you for covered all what I wanted to say, and I did not get the courage to put it in paper..
iamnasra
The nights you spend all awake
Thinking if it is right or a big mistake
The things you will do for the other's sake
The eternal happiness or the heartbreak
.. raw3a :~( and so true :~{..
I have to go look for a hug now..
Jawaher:
I didn't cheat! I just checked the net for the meaning and that is ok ;)
Faith:
I am patient and sometimes I think that I should not be!
Thanks for the comment :)
Nasra:
You are very welcome and it is hard indeed to write about such subject :)
Spontana:
Thanks very much and I hope you found the hug ;)
I can related to what you say..at times not all what we feel can easly be said
Dantana:
Thanks!!
Nasra:
That is true and even if it is said, you can't always make it a poem :p
ANGEL:
Thanks and welcome in my blog :)
"Love is that indescribable feeling
........
The compass that guide you when you are sailing"
DEEP
keep it up
mother courage:
Thanks and welcome in my blog :D
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