Wednesday, June 29, 2005

A Poet's Insanity

Here is my latest poem which talks about how insane my dreams are :D

A Poet's Insanity

Send me beyond the clouds and lay me down
Beneath the twilight where the sun meets the moon
Somewhere among the stars my soul is set to drown
Maybe it is a dream, so don't wake me up too soon

Let me dream and be whoever I want to be
Maybe I will be the darkness when the night falls
Or I will be the light to set the world free
Or the sun hiding behind some shattered walls

Visions of me falling along side the pouring rain
Or travel like the clouds in slow motion
And probably you are thinking that I am insane
Then watch me dive in the sky's deepest ocean

I may even drown in a small drop of tear
Sail the seas among the brownness of my lover’s eyes
Or sit on the palms of the tender hands I revere
Hopeless dreams, I know, but who said poets are wise?

18 comments:

True Faith said...

Hopeless dreams, I know, but who said poets are wise?

Well; in Neverland they are ;)

Faith said...

Very beautiful!

What is it with you and dreams lately :D

That's not insanity, that's humanity, HP :)

It's real good for us to have such dreams, it takes us away just a little from our "reality".. I, for one, always have dreams that are bigger than me.. But anyways, it's healthy to some point..

But hey, don't dream too much okay ;)

Namika said...

Hopeless dreams, I know, but who said poets are wise?

this was the best line lol I just liked it..

:)

A Daydreamer said...

Amazinggggg! mashallah!!!! And yeah, I agree, poets aren't very wise hehe
"Maybe it is a dream, so don't wake me up too soon"
that was my favorite line :)

Hopeless Poet said...

True Faith:
I think anyone who lives in Neverland will be wise ;)
Thanks for the comment :)

Faith:
Thanks!

Well I am a dreamer and my mind all the time is wandering somewhere dreaming ;)

I agree with you and I always say the same. These dreams are for us to feel alive and that we have goals!

I will try not to, but I can't promise :p

Namika:
You just liked that line in the whole poem? :P
I hope not :p
Thanks for the continues support :)

DayDreamer:
Yeah you write poems and you know how unwise we are :p
Thanks for passing by ;)

Salted-Caramel said...

Honestly..

I love it! Mashalah 3alayk, really it's very nice. Who said poets are wise, huh? :P

Troy said...

To be honest... i can´t stop reading your blog...

Pink sHoKoLaa.. said...

hopeless poet...walla jad im serious...i just LUV ur blog..liana mashalla 3alayk u hav that thing that..walla madry shagool bs dont stop!..ga3id it7aaly our blog world ;)
i9ara7a..im my point of view, this is the best poem from all of the others u wrote + posted..
madry its probably cuz a7ib agra ashyaa2 3an dreemz oo floating among the cloudz..:))
p.s. inshalla u "..will be the light to set the world free.."
just keep dreaming ;)~

Rain Drop said...

WoW HP!

I liked your words

They are great ^_^

RD

Namika said...

lol HP, what if I liked that line only :p

and you are most welcome ;)

Enigma said...

Enjoyed reading it. Keep it up HP and hope to see more of your works :D

Hopeless Poet said...

RD:
Thanks Um Habash for the nice comment ^.^

Namika:
Then I will write one line poems and post them and I hope you will like them :p

Enigma:
Thanks for reading it and soon inshallah you will read more :D

Hopeless Poet said...

Salted-Caramel:
Thanks and actually I am wise but I pretend not to :P

Troy:
Thanks and welcome in my blog :)
I checked yours but it is all in Spanish which I don't understand :P
but it looks nice ;)

Pink sHoKoLaa..:
You made me blush with your nice words :$
My blog wouldn't be like it is now without the support of the readers.
Maybe in reality I am the darkness not the light :p
Thank you very much for the nice comment :))

iamnasra said...

Why can not poet be wise..They can be human and certainly they can be wise...LOL

Loved your poem as always you soar so high

Hopeless Poet said...

Nasra:
Poets should not be wise so that they can write crazy things that nobody thinks about :P

Thanks! Soaring so high can be too dangerous because if I fall I will fall from so high! ouch :D

ClOuDs said...

Send me beyond the clouds and lay me down
Beneath the twilight where the sun meets the moon
Somewhere among the stars my soul is set to drown
Maybe it is a dream, so don't wake me up too soon
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Hopeless dreams, I know, but who said poets are wise
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these parts are perfect Mr. Hopeless I liked them ^_^

Hopeless Poet said...

Clouds:
Thanks miss Clouds ;)

I always use your nick in my poems! You are lucky :P

ClOuDs said...

hehe !!

No Mr.Hopeless You are Lucky !! :P