Here is my latest poem and it is called "Your Name" ^.^
Let the flowers whisper your name
With every passing breeze
While the birds sing your name
When they fly among the trees
The mountains will joyfully dance
To the rhythm of your name
And the stars will take a glance
At the beauty of your name
All the letters in your name
Sparkle and shine in the darkness
And all the names beside your name
Vanish and fade out in silence
And be sure that I would write
A poem about your name
And recite it upon the night
Until the dawn memorizes your name
20 comments:
very nice poem! simple & sweet :)
Beautiful sweet poem, you have such a poetic sense . Do you think a man would pay attention for his lovers name ?!!
Keep the good work :)
If few letters did that to him, I think looking into her eyes might kill him.
nice poem hope as usual ... and what is ur favourite girl name ???
All that just because of a name! :) I agree with them, it's so smiple yet sweet.. Keep it up!
Enigma:
Welcome to my blog and thank you for the nice comment :)
Blossom:
Thnaks :)
And I think a man must pay attention to everything and anything about his lover and not only her name.
True Faith:
No it won't :P
I will probably drwon in her eyes for a while then I will be back to normal again and think about a poem about her eyes :P
Jawaher:
Thanks and my favorite girl name is probably Maya and I don't know why :D
Faith:
Yeah all because of a name :P
And thank you for the nice comment :)
I truly loved it :D
~BreathtakinG~:
Thanks and welcome to my blog :D
wow nice one ! ^_~
but what is the name that made u write this poem? :P
You don't have to answer ok ?:P
Clouds:
Thanks ^.*
The name is her name :P
Okay '.'
3ad ma name HP ;) Nice poem about a name..
You kind of inspired me to write something.. Will see if I can get it done.. Hopefully *sigh*
Clouds:
:P ^*.*^
Namika:
Well that is what I was inspired to write about, what can I do :p
And I will be waiting to see what I have inspired you to write about ;)
This reminds me of Nizar Qabani..You captured love so proufoundly ....
Nasra:
Thanks for commenting but guess what? I don't read for him :P
Its been awhile since I read mine and others blog..chicken pox did get to me
oh well it did not take my spirit away
Im glad to read this poem again as I fell in love with it
How about my interview (have you forgoten all about it)???
Nasra:
Welcome back and good to see you back with a good spirit :)
Your interview is almost done. Few questions left to answer or maybe I won't answer them..not sure :P
Try what ever you can answer..Im sure faith will be looking forward to read your interview
Inshallah khair..I still have no energy...but I have been waiting to post your interview so this keep me going ...
and as you can see Im lazy to send mails too...Oh well I regain my spirit back
Nasra:
Well during the weekend I will send you the file. I hope I don't forget :D
And yeah you need to shake up and get rid of the laziness :p
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