Anyway this poem is called "Night by the Ocean" though I have never seen any ocean in my life before :P
The hasty waves of the ocean
Washes away the footprints on the sand
And the cold breeze moving in slow motion
Strikes my face and does not stop where I stand
It goes on and it is like a healing potion
Prescribed for the broken hearted land
And when the ocean embraces the shore
Like a hopeless lover waiting to belong
The sky is joyous like never before
While the ocean's waves sing a song
Such a perfect scene is impossible to ignore
A hopeless poet like me cannot but write along
On the page of water, reflection of the moon
So clear, sending comfort to the wondering eye
And the stars dance to a lovely tune
Played by the water, sand and the sky
But all of that is going to end so soon
When the morning breathes its first sigh
20 comments:
Where is that ocean?
I have many wounds that I need to heal.
This ocean is in my poem! You have to live in it to see the ocean and heal your wounds.
GOD forbid love ever leave you empty handed,
I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean,
Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens,
Promise me that you'll give faith a fighting chance,
And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance.
I hope you dance....I hope you dance.
"And when the ocean embraces the shore
Like a hopeless lover waiting to belong
The sky is joyous like never before
While the ocean's waves sing a song
Such a perfect scene is impossible to ignore
A hopeless poet like me cannot but write along"
i liked this part :)
thanx hopeless ^_^
Now this is something that I would like reading more often :p
Nice poem HP, you made me live the moment...
PS: why still lonely?
I Knew i can inspire you like you have inspired me...LOL
Ocean has its charm to our heart..so once you gaze to it...it somehow imprints its dose to our soul
Hope:
No actually, I feel that I am bigger than the ocean and larger than life :P
Just kidding ;)
I like that song :D
Clouds:
Thanks for your comment ^.^
Actually I should have put something about clouds in the poem, but the sky was clear sorry :P
Namika:
Finally ha? :P
Thank you and I hope you enjoyed living the moment ;)
Still lonely because I forgot or I have been lazy to change it :D I will change it now
Nasra:
You can call that mutual inspiration :D
That's so poetic :)
I like it.
Nice blog!
I really like the poem I like your peotic sence ...
Love it ..thanks :)
Still lonely I see *rolleyes*
HP,
great!
I liked the ending..
Keep writing
RD
Faith:
Thanks and welcome in my blog :)
Blossom:
Thanks for the comment :)
Salted-Caramel:
Kashafteeni? ;)
Namika:
lool! I forgot that day but I changed it now :D
RD:
Thanks and I will keep writing :)
i wonder y u call urself a hopeless poet ....u contradicted urself .....i m new to ur blog and i like it very much
arabian gulf kafi. mo shar6 ocean
Meetu:
Well you are not the only who thinks like that. But when I started the blog I was kinda hopeless and the nick got stuck ;)
And I am glad you liked the blog :)
Flamingoliya:
But the word gulf is not as romantic as ocean don't you think so? ;)
Salted-Caramel:
Ok I will try to write one :)
Wow!!
You will write in Arabic
We are waiting ^^
RD:
I said I will TRY to so it is not a promise ;)
Oh!
You're going to write in arabic !!
That's cool!
I'll be waiting ('_')
Clouds:
I hope you will not have to wait for so long :P
Pink sHoKoLaa:
Welcome in :)
Thanks for the nice comment and the support. As for the Arabic I am really trying! But somehow it is too difficult for me and I don't know why! So give me time!!
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