Sunday, November 20, 2005

Forest of Magic

It's been a long time since I've posted a poem! So here it goes, something I wrote long time ago and I've just finished it recently.

Forest of Magic

Its beauty, so alluring
Silently, speaking to you
Words that are curing
Guiding you through
There is a mysterious voice calling
Softly, whispering in your ears
A dazzling winds howling
And a shadow from far appears
Widely opening its arms
Inviting you to come along
With its irresistible charms
You lose the sense of right and wrong

You feel the magic of this place
As you drown into temptation
A temporary pleasure to embrace
Is it real or just your imagination?
So you walk few steps ahead
Not expecting what to find
Many thoughts are in your head
About the real world you left behind
And the fairy tales you have read before
Are nothing like what you have seen
A sensation that you cannot ignore
So peaceful and so serene

16 comments:

Faith said...

So magical, so mysterious..

I feel like I need not only read what I see, but also what's behind these lines..

I read it a couple of times, and everytime I read it I saw a different picture.. with different meanings.. and I like that :)

LaiaLy_q8 said...

i would love to hear that in a song

well done :)

adaydreamer said...

that was sooooo nice mashallah! one of my favorites of yours! i feel im in the forest and i could feel every word you say...

well done! :)

True Faith said...

:)

ClOuDs said...

Lovely !

MissCosmoKuwait said...

Brilliant!

Namika said...

What I had in mind when I read the peom was peace. I liked it HP :) well done..

jawaher said...

u are a great poet hp mashAllah :D

u gave me a good emotional feeling that i really missed ..thanks :D

Starry Night said...

All that i want to say..were said by Faith :)

Hopeless Poet said...

Faith:
Thanks for the nice words :)

Laialy_Q8:
Well bring me a singer I like and I will make him sing it :P
Thanks :)
DayDreamer:
And I hope you didn't get lost there ;)
Thanks :)

True Faith:
:D

Hopeless Poet said...

Clouds:
Thankssssssssssssss :D

MissCosmoKuwait:
Thanks!!

Namika:
Peace is there in my forest for sure ;)
Thanks

Jaweher:
Thanks for your words and you are welcome :).

Starry_Night:
Well thanks for making me read her comment again :P
And thanks for passing by! And good to see you blogging again ;)

adaydreamer said...

wayaaaaaaaaaanik??? UPDATE :P

Starry Night said...

U r welcome :P

waiting for the next post :)

iamnasra said...

Been awhile
Since I heard from you
I wonder how you are
In this distance so far
I send many paryers above
"Ya Allah keep him safe and sound"
Let him continue to write
So magical words over here
And to bless me with full sight
To read his words so many times

Hopeless Poet said...

DayDreamer:
Here but not in the mood :D

Starry Night:
I hope that I can post something soon!

Nasra:
Thanks for the poem! You made me blush :$

Tempest said...

I am not one for commenting, but i just had to say this one was so beautifully composed, you have quite a talent and its nice that you can share it with others, thank you, God bless your Soul and give you the inspiration to compose more heart touching poems.