Wednesday, December 14, 2005

A Moon's Serenade

Finally! I am here again and posting! It's been a long time! Very very long! Did anybody miss me? :P

Anyway here is my latest poem and I am glad that I have finished it! Enjoy it until the next time I post something new :D

A Moon's Serenade

Here we are sitting on the edge of the moon
Watching the world below
The stars and the planets around us croon
Our entwined fingers are dancing slow
We are no birds be we were able to fly
And for once in our lives we are ruling the sky

Listen to the sound of a wonderful serenade
Drift into a dream while I am holding your hands
Do not let the brightness in your eyes ever fade
Let me breathe the breeze that passed through your strands
I like it when the scent of you fills my senses
And I stop thinking when I see your smile
One touch you can touch me and it will shatter all my defenses
Then I am yours for a lifetime, not only for a while

24 comments:

MissCosmoKuwait said...

That was beautiful!! Nothing like a nice poem right before the weekend! I loved it!

Mochness said...
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Starry Night said...

glad to see u posting again :)

I really enjoyed reading the poem ..so romantic :)

adaydreamer said...

a5eeeeeeeeeran your posted!!!

veryyyy nice!

"I like it when the scent of you fills my senses
And I stop thinking when I see your smile
One touch you can touch me and it will shatter all my defenses
Then I am yours for a lifetime, not only for a while"

those were my favorite lines!!!!!

Hopeless Poet said...

MissCosmoKuwait:
Thanks and enjoy your weekend ;)

Mochness:
Thanks! And well yeah hopeless romantic is what I am actually!

Starry Night:
Glad that I am posting too and glad that you enjoyed the poem :D

DayDreamer:
Yeah a5eeran!! Sorry for taking such a long time :P
Thanks for the comment ;)

LaiaLy_q8 said...

welcome back

"And for once in our lives we are ruling the sky"

So gangsta’ :p

jawaher said...

Then I am yours for a lifetime, not only for a while

I loved it hopeless as much as i loved all ur poems :)

Kazablanka said...

Welcome back :)

Namika said...

first of all welcome back.. about time you post a new poem :p next time don't make us wait this long you hear :p

"One touch you can touch me and it will shatter all my defenses
Then I am yours for a lifetime, not only for a while "

those two lines were just wow :D keep it up..

Flamingoliya said...

what do strands smell like, bukhoor?

Hopeless Poet said...

Laialy_q8:
Thanks :D
And no! No gangastas! I am the king and she is my queen and we will rule!

Jawaher:
Thanks and inshallah you will love the new ones too ;)

Kazablanka:
Thanks :D

Namika:
Thanks and sorry! I was really not so into the mood of blogging or poeming :P
;)

Flamingoliya:
I think shampoo! But I didn't guess the brand name yet :P

Najah said...

Amazing, just amazing...


U r so talented mashalllah...

Bissa said...

wow
that's awesome man !

iamnasra said...

Its been awhile I love where I can be taken with your poetry...Love the way it takes me to places

Thank you

Thank you for being a friend

iamnasra said...

Its been awhile I love where I can be taken with your poetry...Love the way it takes me to places

Thank you

Thank you for being a friend

iamnasra said...

Its been awhile I love where I can be taken with your poetry...Love the way it takes me to places

Thank you

Thank you for being a friend

iamnasra said...

Its been awhile I love where I can be taken with your poetry...Love the way it takes me to places

Thank you

Thank you for being a friend

Brava Valentia said...

iamnasra

u're spanning ;-p


hopeless poet miss ya !! tsadeg ?! lol

Hopeless Poet said...

Najah:
Thanks I am the talented hopeless poet :p

metallic-kitty:
Welcome in my blog and thanks :D

Nasra:
That is so sweet of you to say :D
Thank you for your support and for the additional 3 comments :P

Mother Courage:
I do believe yeah! And I miss me too :P

PiNK-y said...

i loved the part about ruling the sky...baroo7 adawir more of your poems now :P

Hopeless Poet said...

PiNK-y:
Welcome in my blog and I hope that you liked the other poems ;)

Voluble_grl said...

wow! this was gr8!
i was missin a Lot for i just found ur blog !

keep on writin bro,
good luck :)

oh, & very interesting blog, so enjoyable :)

Hopeless Poet said...

Voluble_grl:
And I was lucky that you ended up landing in my humble blog ;)
Thanks for the nice words :)

Broken¤String said...

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