I hope I didn't post this poem before with a different end because i have just written the last stanza :O
I hope it is a good comeback to romantic poems!
Do not turn off the light
Let me see you clearly
I won’t let go out of my sight
Till I close my eyes when I hold you dearly
I am not sure if I can resist your smell
Nor the warmth of your breath on my face
You take me to another world, you can tell
That I am lost in your embrace
Lay your head on my chest
And listen carefully to my heart beating
Live in me; let me be your nest
Let my lap be your preferable seating
As I run my fingers through your hair
And feel you soft skin as it touches mine
Look into my eyes and see my loving stare
And I look into yours and see love and its shine
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hey I know nothing about poetry but I love reading lyrics , and I can tell this would be a very nice song ;)
Mai:
Thanks :D
And do you know any singer who is good enough to sing this? ;)
Really Really Really beautiful poems..
It's a strong comeback.
I liked your choice of words..
Don't stop....Keep writing..
Thank you..
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No thanks to you :D
Keep reading ;)
I dore the 3rd stanza :D
beautifully written :D
When will be your birthday ??
Gloomy:
Thanks :D
The 3rd stanza was actually what made the poem difficult to finish cos the original plan was to be a hot romantic poem but then I just wanted to finish it :P
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On the 13th! That means next Monday :D
What about you? :O
on 24th sep
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So you are not a Virgo like me :O
believe me I don't know about me :D...
I don't care about this
good bye
Happy birthday Hopeless Poet :D
3ogbal 100 3am Insha'a Allah
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Thank you very much :$
"Lay your head on my chest
And listen carefully to my heart beating
Live in me; let me be your nest
Let my lap be your preferable seating"
Romantic poem as it should be!
Loved it!
The 3rd stanza is realy something..!! Happy belated birthday ;)
hey mr. happy belated birthday. sorry for wishing u late but i didnt really hve time. bdw this p0em is great. <3 it
very lovely poem, I like it! =)
I like when it says Live in me... so beautiful :D
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I loved your blog and the poetry here.
I wonder if these poems written by you or other?
>>>your blog deserve the following =)
I loved your blog and the poetry here.
I wonder if these poems written by you or other?
>>>your blog deserve the following =)
Wonderful! Fantastic!
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