Thursday, September 09, 2010

Do not Turn off the Light

I hope I didn't post this poem before with a different end because i have just written the last stanza :O
I hope it is a good comeback to romantic poems! 


Do not turn off the light
Let me see you clearly
I won’t let go out of my sight
Till I close my eyes when I hold you dearly

I am not sure if I can resist your smell
Nor the warmth of your breath on my face
You take me to another world, you can tell
That I am lost in your embrace

Lay your head on my chest
And listen carefully to my heart beating
Live in me; let me be your nest
Let my lap be your preferable seating

As I run my fingers through your hair
And feel you soft skin as it touches mine
Look into my eyes and see my loving stare
And I look into yours and see love and its shine


21 comments:

mai said...

hey I know nothing about poetry but I love reading lyrics , and I can tell this would be a very nice song ;)

Hopeless Poet said...

Mai:
Thanks :D
And do you know any singer who is good enough to sing this? ;)

I am visible... said...

Really Really Really beautiful poems..
It's a strong comeback.
I liked your choice of words..

Don't stop....Keep writing..

Thank you..

Hopeless Poet said...

I am visible:
No thanks to you :D
Keep reading ;)

Gloomy said...

I dore the 3rd stanza :D

beautifully written :D

I am visible... said...

When will be your birthday ??

Hopeless Poet said...

Gloomy:
Thanks :D
The 3rd stanza was actually what made the poem difficult to finish cos the original plan was to be a hot romantic poem but then I just wanted to finish it :P

I am visible:
On the 13th! That means next Monday :D
What about you? :O

I am visible... said...

on 24th sep

Hopeless Poet said...

I am visible:
So you are not a Virgo like me :O

I am visible... said...

believe me I don't know about me :D...
I don't care about this

I am visible... said...

good bye

I am visible... said...

Happy birthday Hopeless Poet :D

3ogbal 100 3am Insha'a Allah

Hopeless Poet said...

I am visible:
Thank you very much :$

msha3erha said...

"Lay your head on my chest
And listen carefully to my heart beating
Live in me; let me be your nest
Let my lap be your preferable seating"

Romantic poem as it should be!
Loved it!

Rummy said...

The 3rd stanza is realy something..!! Happy belated birthday ;)

IamSilla said...

hey mr. happy belated birthday. sorry for wishing u late but i didnt really hve time. bdw this p0em is great. <3 it

RouGe NiKstA said...

very lovely poem, I like it! =)

Liliai said...

I like when it says Live in me... so beautiful :D

http://angelicacrimony.blogspot.com/

Ghala ツ said...

I loved your blog and the poetry here.
I wonder if these poems written by you or other?

>>>your blog deserve the following =)

Ghala ツ said...

I loved your blog and the poetry here.
I wonder if these poems written by you or other?

>>>your blog deserve the following =)

The Tame Lion said...

Wonderful! Fantastic!