Oh sleepless nightWith my demons I fight
With no sword or shield
My bed is the battle field
Cover oh my sweet cover
No sweet dreams of my lover
My pillow knows my fears
And it swallows all my tears
The night is so silent and dreary
And even though I am bleary
I can't find a way to sleep
I can't find the tears to weep
So soon the sun will shine
And brings peace to this heart of mine
And ends this sleepless night
And I will lose my hopeless fight
16 comments:
Are you a poet?!
I told you what I think.. ;) Lovely peom BTW.. My pillow is full of tears gotta tell ya
Nice poem
niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice :D
two thumbs up :D
it reminds me of my sleepless nights :S
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LOL. Great poem as usual :]
:)
Blue Dress:
Not really! I am a grave digger! :P
Chika:
Your pillow can handle that don't worry..
Mademoiselle:
Thanks and welcome in my blog :)
Gloomy:
Thanks :D I think anyone can related to it! Specially after returning to work or school from a long vacation :|
Perfecty:
Oh glad I did before you get mad at me!
Thankss :D
Glow:
:))))))
it just felt as one of the poem or thoughts I shall write at night...
so I assumed that u did that at night just b4 sleep...
nice thought...
the end has a hope...
Desert-Roses:
I actually wrote it in the morning at work! :|
Thanks ..
hehehe...
again that was just a damn feeling and I told you that...
I wasnt trying to get smart here :P
9a7 elSaanK : )
Oh that reminds me of bad days when I am worried or sad I can't sleep..
Lovely keep it up!
that's why i hate not sleeping right away. To avoid this i try to dose off as soon as my head hits the pillow
Desert-Roses:
I know ;)
Dubai:
9a7 badnich :) and thanks
:::: SHAYOUMA ::::
I hope you don't have many nights like that!
Thanksssss
Maryam:
That works few times with me! Sometimes I watch TV and I sleep half way through whatever I am watching and when I go to bed I feel hyper again!!
Thanks for passing by
ooh poor thing :(
you should try panadol night it really works great :p
amz7 lol
i did read the poem & it is soooooo good mshallah :D
i keep sayin the same thing for all your poems
try to write something not that good so i can say somethin different lol :p
Your blog keeps getting better and better! Your older articles are not as good as newer ones you have a lot more creativity and originality now keep it up!
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