The reflection on waterThe blurred image of me
Takes me back
Makes me remember
Makes me stand still
And wonder
Living life like a pretender
The reflection of me
In your eyes
When you steal some glances
It sets me free
It is the way I want to be
When you steal some glances
It sets me free
It is the way I want to be
12 comments:
Mirror.
very nice.
shoo mirror!! He's taking about when he looks in my eyez & how that makes him feel :P LOL!!! :$
LOOOL chika!!!
beautiful poem :]
are you depressed?
very nice poem, and the picture matches :D
loooooool chikapappi
Living life like a pretender
mara 3ajabny :D
nice poem :D
w the last part is so sweet.
nice one !
I like the way u write
3eshtaw!
lool..I hope u dont mind gogo...each time I write a thing and show him...he says: yeah 7elo but depressed....kel el awadem depressed in his dictionary...
:P
so First time for me in ur blog....
when I read the name of ur blog(hopeless poet) I looked 3ala6ool...
never seeen any in this blog sphere to write poems..maybe i didnt search well...so in the end let me give u el zebda..
that was very spirtiual touching!! keep the goods up!!
Blue Dress:
No mirrors :P
Thanks :D
Chika:
LOL! Yeah right :P
Perfecty:
Thanks very much :]
GoGo:
Wake me up before you go go! :P
Not that much depressed :D
Swair:
I looked hard to find the picture so it had to match ;)
Gloomy:
Thanks glad you liked it :D
Cat:
Thanks and I like the way you comment lol!
Judy Abbott:
Allah y3ayshich weyana :P
Desert Roses:
No I didn't mind him at all! I can write depressing stuff while I am happy :P
Welcome in my blog and I don't know how you missed it! I am almost every where :P
There are few other poetry blogs around.
Thanks very much :)
nicely written :)
Dreamy:
Thank you very much :D
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