Well it's been ages since I've posted anything here! I don't know why but I just don't have anything to say or I have no mood to say anything or simply because I haven't been able to finish any poem recently!!
Here is this poem that I wrote the most of it long time ago and managed to finish it today! I know it is not that good but I think I have to post something anyway :P
Kiss Me
Kiss me but not on my lips
Don’t even touch them with your finger tips
Kiss me but not on my cheek
It’s something more that I seek
Kiss me but not on my hand
I hope you soon will understand
Kiss me but not on my eye
Don’t try to taste my tears when I cry
Kiss me but not on the tip of my nose
Though your lips are soft like a rose
Kiss me but not on my forehead
Soon I will try to tell you where instead
Kiss me but not on any body part
For it won’t last within my heart
Kiss me for I don’t know where
Kiss me and leave your mark on there
10 comments:
يا عيني
ما عبر
:p
so you wanted him/her to kiss your a** bas kent meste7e ;p?
wow so u finally had the chance to finish it :)
Nice one ;)
Welcome back ..and what a remarkable come back ;)
Laialy_q8:
Thanks and I am glad to see you commenting :)
Flamingoliya:
I didn't get the comment sorry :P
DayDreamer:
Thanks and yeah I didn't lose it, thank God ;)
anonymous:
Didn't you read the line where I mention kiss me but not on any body part? Isn't the a** part of the body? :P
Mitsuki:
Thanks and good to see you here ;)
Blossom:
Thanks and glad to see you commenting here again :)
I liked..Not the best one to judge poetry but it was really cute..:D
Lilacs:
Thanks and I know what you mean! It is even hard for me to judge poems!
And welcome in my blog :D
ok dear you said "kiss me but not on any body part"
how about a kiss from a soul to a soul would that count??? Just a suggestion so it doesn't leave your readers lost in your words :)
It's very clean I would say :))
thank god u said "Kiss me but not on any body part" coz i opened my eyes real wide when you ran out of places for that kiss hehe..
It is very interesting for me to read that blog. Thanx for it. I like such topics and everything that is connected to them. I definitely want to read a bit more on that blog soon.
Truly yours
Alice Tudes
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