Sunday, April 24, 2005

In The Garden

Here is a poem that I wrote a while ago but I didn't post it directly because I was not that much comfortable with it and I am still not so comfortable so I will leave the judgement for you!

In the Garden

At noon, sitting in the garden
Talking and reminiscing
And the passing time eases the burden
Without us even noticing

Two young hearts and souls
Destiny brought them together
Sharing common hopes and goals
And enjoying the nice weather

Flowers are all around
Of different types and colors
Perfectly laid on the ground
Joyful view for the dwellers

So we lay on the green grass
And gaze at the clear blue sky
While cool winds gently pass
And birds slowly fly

We enjoy playing hide and seek
Behind that big willow tree
And the chase beside that creek
It is the feeling of being free

We run around until the nighttime
And we stay awhile to watch the stars
Their beauty is sublime
And we feel that the sky is all ours

Now it is time for us to go
And leave this garden alone
But inside our hearts we know
That this garden is our own

And there will be a time again
When we visit this garden of bliss
To forget about the pain
And enjoy where the real love exists


iamnasra said...

SO much peace in this poem..a gentle song taken by the breeze....

I loved are good poet, keep up the poetry going ...

Kazablanka said...



this one is too beautiful to steal... :)

Preternatural_aL said...

so touching...reminds me of a garden i once shared with someone.

*reality-check: al wanted to sound touched and emotional.
cool poem all the same ;)

Namika said...

Why you were not comfy posting this poem? It brought peace to my heart.. so peacful and comfy.. I liked it :)

Najah said...

oooh oooh this is so DREAMY and Romantic... very well writttten TP....
I re-read the two last paragraphs twice!

Hope said...

It is a gorgeous piece of writing. Im glad you posted it. The picture and the poem together made me dive in my own imagination.

Hopeless Poet said...

Thanks for the comment and for the continues support, appreciated :)

Oh you mean you will not steal this one? Thanks very much .. I will give it to you for free :P

I almost believed but then I remembered that it is Al talking but you are cool all the same ;)

Hopeless Poet said...

I was not comfy because I showed it to someone and the feedback I got was not that encouraging! I am glad to hear that it had that nice effect on you.

A romantic dreamer such myself is always expected to come up with dreamy and romantic poems ;)

Thanks and I am sure now you will prefer this garden over your forest :P

Kazablanka said...

LOL ya3ni if i dont steal stuff you will give them for me for free??

god why didnt you say that min el-bidaya!!!

I love free stuff :D

Hopeless Poet said...

I didn't say that cos you 3ala 6ool wanted to steal them didn't even give me a chance to tell you anything :P

Megan said...

OMG!!!! Its so pretty!!!! I lurv it!!! It was very tranquil....mmmm gives me pink fuzzies
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