Sunday, February 12, 2006

Waiting for You

Here is my latest poem, I wrote the 1st 2 stanzas about a year ago and the rest of the poem was written yesterday :P

Dear readers, this is my Valentine's Day gift to you :P

Waiting for You

The crazy raindrops fall upon my windowpane
The sound of thunder is driving me insane
Inside my heart I am crying in pain
While the memories of you still linger in my brain

Every day I am waiting for you to appear
Out in the darkness, your shadow is clear
It is getting worse year after year
Can’t you see that I am slowly dying here?

Maybe you are close or somewhere far away
Maybe I have passed by you someday
We could have talked but did not have much to say
And if I knew it was you, I would have asked you to stay

I wonder if you can hear it when my soul calls
For the help needed in my life before apart it falls
The sound of my pain echoes in these empty halls
And I am here sitting hopeless surrounded by these gloomy walls

I am here so lost and I do not know what to do
Maybe you can help; maybe you can guide me through
But only if I can break away, only if I can get to you
And only if you believe in me and if you know that I am true


LaiaLy_q8 said...

very very nice :D
well done and said :)

Lavender© said...

Lovely work.. keep it up!

candle of hope said...

i liked the poem alot..
so well written..

i wont consider it as a "valentines gift".. cos there's no such thing as valentines..

keep writing ..

Hopeless Poet said...

Thanks for reading and commenting :D

Thanks and nice to see you here :)

Candle of Hope:
Thank you :D
And about Valentines, well I was being sarcastic there :P

Namika said...

HP, that was simply lovely.. :)

Hopeless Poet said...

Thank you and good to see you again :D

Anonymous said...

wow that was verry great.

Princess Coffee Lover said...

it made my eyes water... it made me feel hopeless. it made me feel lonely. it made me love it.

you are so true. who ever she is... she is lucky.