Saturday, January 21, 2006

Silver Moon

Here is my latest poem. Enjoy :D

Silver Moon

Silver moon shines in the sky above
And the light fills my soul
As I try to empty my heart from the love
That prevented me from being whole
Looking for the lost source of inspiration
While sitting here with no motivation
Wasted effort and wasted time
Trying to think of the perfect rhyme

Maybe a dance under the moonlight
Will help me to ease the pain
And if it was not for the moon shining bright
You would have seen me dancing insane
I know I must forget you, upon this night
And try not to remember you again


A Daydreamer said...

dont forget... let her live in your memory....

LaiaLy_q8 said...

I can imagine someone sitting alone under the moonlight reciting this poem. Nicely said Hopeless poet

Obsessive Compulsive said...

I love the pictures you place with the poems you write....very creative!

Salty-C said...

Aww.. :/ Inshalah u'll find someone else who will not only ease the pain, but make it all go away.

Are your poems written by your imagination or personal experiences? ;)

bentad said...

Maybe a dance under the moonlight
Will help me to ease the pain
+ + +


Luved it ..!

True Faith said...

Moonlight is a reflection from the sun.

Just wait for the sun to shine in the morning and you will see how great life is :)

God bless you :)

Faith said...

if only it was that easy to forget someone..

Dhabyani said...

Very well written poem

candle of hope said...

such a lovely poem ..

Hopeless Poet said...

I can't! There isn't enough space left in my memory :p I think I need a new hard disk :D

That was nice of you to say! Thanks for your comment

Obsessive Compulsive:
Welcome in my blog and thanks but I don't think I am that creative!

Nice to see you again here ;)

Most poems I wrote and I will write are from imagination and this one is from those imaginary poems ;)

Hopeless Poet said...

Welcome in here and thanks for your comment :)

True Faith:
Long time no see!
I know it is a reflection but sometimes the reflection is prettier than the real image :p
God bless you too :)

For me it is impossible to forget..

Hopeless Poet said...

Thanks and welcome in my blog :D

Candle of Hope:
Thanks and welcome in! You have a nice nickname ;)
It makes me feel that I am candless beside being hopeless :p

Peach said...

haakh .. laish killa 7izin ya jima3a .. laish! I like .. bas za3alt ;(