Friday, November 13, 2009

Don't..

This is an old poem that I wrote and was waiting to be finished but after reading twice tonight I have decided that there's no need to write more in it. I think the meaning is complete!


Don't let me open my eyes
I can see better when they're closed
Don't wake me up from my sleep
I have my life there to keep
Where reality has been exposed
And all the beauty that never dies

14 comments:

  1. Don't wake me up from my sleep
    I have my life there to keep.

    speaking about my life, huh ??

    nice poem :)

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  2. ya salam 3alaik!
    it really didnt need to b completed

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  3. Anonymous10:31 AM

    Nice words to start my day with :D
    Meaninful!

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  4. beautiful x

    Missy
    For all things fashion:
    http://thefashionfusion.blogspot.com

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  5. so talented, cant stop looking through your blog!

    bespok.com

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  6. its already completed...
    amazing!

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  7. Aafke:
    Thanks :)

    MuSe:
    No about my life :D And thanks :)

    RainDrop:
    Ya salam 3aleech enty :D

    msha3erha:
    Glad you started your day with my poem :D

    Missy:
    Thanks and sorry for not commenting back in your blog since I am not that much into fashion lool

    jack bespoke:
    Thanks and please keep looking! :)

    Standy:
    Thank you very much :)

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  8. Anonymous9:54 PM

    soo deep
    i love it

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  9. Short, yet passionate... brilliant!

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  10. Short yet deep !

    Luved it ;D

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  11. true.. this is beautiful as it is..

    damn i loved it! lool

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  12. This is beautiful! It's meanginful without being long,it's short and sweet and makes a statement. Lovely :)

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  13. i liked your poem
    write poems 2
    i m waiting 4 u in my blog
    let's know each other wellsms

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