Monday, November 12, 2007

Reflection

The reflection on water
The blurred image of me
Takes me back
Makes me remember
Makes me stand still
And wonder
Living life like a pretender

The reflection of me
In your eyes
When you steal some glances
It sets me free
It is the way I want to be

12 comments:

  1. Anonymous12:15 PM

    Mirror.

    very nice.

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  2. Anonymous12:35 PM

    shoo mirror!! He's taking about when he looks in my eyez & how that makes him feel :P LOL!!! :$

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  3. Anonymous3:50 PM

    LOOOL chika!!!

    beautiful poem :]

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  4. Anonymous5:19 PM

    are you depressed?

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  5. Anonymous5:57 PM

    very nice poem, and the picture matches :D

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  6. loooooool chikapappi
    Living life like a pretender
    mara 3ajabny :D

    nice poem :D

    w the last part is so sweet.

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  7. Anonymous3:30 AM

    nice one !

    I like the way u write

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  8. lool..I hope u dont mind gogo...each time I write a thing and show him...he says: yeah 7elo but depressed....kel el awadem depressed in his dictionary...

    :P

    so First time for me in ur blog....
    when I read the name of ur blog(hopeless poet) I looked 3ala6ool...

    never seeen any in this blog sphere to write poems..maybe i didnt search well...so in the end let me give u el zebda..

    that was very spirtiual touching!! keep the goods up!!

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  9. Blue Dress:
    No mirrors :P
    Thanks :D

    Chika:
    LOL! Yeah right :P

    Perfecty:
    Thanks very much :]

    GoGo:
    Wake me up before you go go! :P
    Not that much depressed :D

    Swair:
    I looked hard to find the picture so it had to match ;)

    Gloomy:
    Thanks glad you liked it :D

    Cat:
    Thanks and I like the way you comment lol!

    Judy Abbott:
    Allah y3ayshich weyana :P

    Desert Roses:
    No I didn't mind him at all! I can write depressing stuff while I am happy :P

    Welcome in my blog and I don't know how you missed it! I am almost every where :P
    There are few other poetry blogs around.

    Thanks very much :)

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  10. Anonymous11:46 AM

    nicely written :)

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  11. Dreamy:
    Thank you very much :D

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