I have just finished this poem! I started writing it longer than I can remember and just finished it tonight after I felt that I should finish something!
What Is Left
What is left is a picture on the wall
With a frame about to fall
A few strands of your hair
On a hairbrush lying somewhere
The empty bottle of your perfume
And a plant that was never destined to bloom
A trace of your scent left on the bed
And an old pillow that used to sleep beneath your head
A memory of our last dance
Where every star in the sky had a glance
A silent vision that runs within a gleam
What is left of you is just a distant dream
at last you've finshed something :P
ReplyDeleteI love this poem and i love the way it ended :D although its a bit sad but I LOVE it (aham shay sh'hadaty ana :P)
Welcome back.
Yes at last!! And I am still met7amis to post more :D
ReplyDeleteAnd thanks. Shahadtik ma asta`3ni 3anha ;)
Sir you are talented as I found some of your other poems impressive, bass this poem isn't ur best, it's spirit free.
ReplyDeleteSweet (^_^), , ,
ReplyDeleteTouching, , ,
Mabrook 3al finshing
I loved ur poem. Yet I found it a bit heartbreaking and cheerless! I hope that it’s not a product of some personal sad incidents in ur life.
ReplyDeleteUAE ALIAS:
ReplyDeleteThanks and I agree with you but I had to finish something and post after a very long time!
lill_miz_wackoo:
Thank you and allah ybarek feech :D
Cat:
Glad you loved it and no it is not a product of a real experience :D
Thankss :)
Happy Eid :)
ReplyDeleteit's a sad poem but I like it. it reminded of someone to be honest :/
ReplyDeleteThat's such a sad one ... why are you hopeless?!
ReplyDeleteGLAMOROUS:
ReplyDeleteSame to you and thanks for commenting :D
Noufa:
I am glad that you've liked it :)
Chikapappi:
I am not that hopeless :P
Thanks for commenting :)
I like it, it's so soft when you read it,, flows like a silk dress in the breeze .. ya5i i'm trying to appear romantic =p
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