Thursday, September 09, 2010

Do not Turn off the Light

I hope I didn't post this poem before with a different end because i have just written the last stanza :O
I hope it is a good comeback to romantic poems! 


Do not turn off the light
Let me see you clearly
I won’t let go out of my sight
Till I close my eyes when I hold you dearly

I am not sure if I can resist your smell
Nor the warmth of your breath on my face
You take me to another world, you can tell
That I am lost in your embrace

Lay your head on my chest
And listen carefully to my heart beating
Live in me; let me be your nest
Let my lap be your preferable seating

As I run my fingers through your hair
And feel you soft skin as it touches mine
Look into my eyes and see my loving stare
And I look into yours and see love and its shine


21 comments:

  1. hey I know nothing about poetry but I love reading lyrics , and I can tell this would be a very nice song ;)

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  2. Mai:
    Thanks :D
    And do you know any singer who is good enough to sing this? ;)

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  3. Really Really Really beautiful poems..
    It's a strong comeback.
    I liked your choice of words..

    Don't stop....Keep writing..

    Thank you..

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  4. I am visible:
    No thanks to you :D
    Keep reading ;)

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  5. I dore the 3rd stanza :D

    beautifully written :D

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  6. When will be your birthday ??

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  7. Gloomy:
    Thanks :D
    The 3rd stanza was actually what made the poem difficult to finish cos the original plan was to be a hot romantic poem but then I just wanted to finish it :P

    I am visible:
    On the 13th! That means next Monday :D
    What about you? :O

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  8. I am visible:
    So you are not a Virgo like me :O

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  9. believe me I don't know about me :D...
    I don't care about this

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  10. Happy birthday Hopeless Poet :D

    3ogbal 100 3am Insha'a Allah

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  11. I am visible:
    Thank you very much :$

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  12. "Lay your head on my chest
    And listen carefully to my heart beating
    Live in me; let me be your nest
    Let my lap be your preferable seating"

    Romantic poem as it should be!
    Loved it!

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  13. The 3rd stanza is realy something..!! Happy belated birthday ;)

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  14. hey mr. happy belated birthday. sorry for wishing u late but i didnt really hve time. bdw this p0em is great. <3 it

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  15. very lovely poem, I like it! =)

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  16. I like when it says Live in me... so beautiful :D

    http://angelicacrimony.blogspot.com/

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  17. I loved your blog and the poetry here.
    I wonder if these poems written by you or other?

    >>>your blog deserve the following =)

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  18. I loved your blog and the poetry here.
    I wonder if these poems written by you or other?

    >>>your blog deserve the following =)

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  19. Wonderful! Fantastic!

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