Finally! I am here again and posting! It's been a long time! Very very long! Did anybody miss me? :P
Anyway here is my latest poem and I am glad that I have finished it! Enjoy it until the next time I post something new :D
A Moon's Serenade
Here we are sitting on the edge of the moon
Watching the world below
The stars and the planets around us croon
Our entwined fingers are dancing slow
We are no birds be we were able to fly
And for once in our lives we are ruling the sky
Listen to the sound of a wonderful serenade
Drift into a dream while I am holding your hands
Do not let the brightness in your eyes ever fade
Let me breathe the breeze that passed through your strands
I like it when the scent of you fills my senses
And I stop thinking when I see your smile
One touch you can touch me and it will shatter all my defenses
Then I am yours for a lifetime, not only for a while
That was beautiful!! Nothing like a nice poem right before the weekend! I loved it!
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ReplyDeletea5eeeeeeeeeran your posted!!!
ReplyDeleteveryyyy nice!
"I like it when the scent of you fills my senses
And I stop thinking when I see your smile
One touch you can touch me and it will shatter all my defenses
Then I am yours for a lifetime, not only for a while"
those were my favorite lines!!!!!
MissCosmoKuwait:
ReplyDeleteThanks and enjoy your weekend ;)
Mochness:
Thanks! And well yeah hopeless romantic is what I am actually!
Starry Night:
Glad that I am posting too and glad that you enjoyed the poem :D
DayDreamer:
Yeah a5eeran!! Sorry for taking such a long time :P
Thanks for the comment ;)
first of all welcome back.. about time you post a new poem :p next time don't make us wait this long you hear :p
ReplyDelete"One touch you can touch me and it will shatter all my defenses
Then I am yours for a lifetime, not only for a while "
those two lines were just wow :D keep it up..
what do strands smell like, bukhoor?
ReplyDeleteLaialy_q8:
ReplyDeleteThanks :D
And no! No gangastas! I am the king and she is my queen and we will rule!
Jawaher:
Thanks and inshallah you will love the new ones too ;)
Kazablanka:
Thanks :D
Namika:
Thanks and sorry! I was really not so into the mood of blogging or poeming :P
;)
Flamingoliya:
I think shampoo! But I didn't guess the brand name yet :P
Amazing, just amazing...
ReplyDeleteU r so talented mashalllah...
wow
ReplyDeletethat's awesome man !
Its been awhile I love where I can be taken with your poetry...Love the way it takes me to places
ReplyDeleteThank you
Thank you for being a friend
Its been awhile I love where I can be taken with your poetry...Love the way it takes me to places
ReplyDeleteThank you
Thank you for being a friend
Its been awhile I love where I can be taken with your poetry...Love the way it takes me to places
ReplyDeleteThank you
Thank you for being a friend
Its been awhile I love where I can be taken with your poetry...Love the way it takes me to places
ReplyDeleteThank you
Thank you for being a friend
iamnasra
ReplyDeleteu're spanning ;-p
hopeless poet miss ya !! tsadeg ?! lol
Najah:
ReplyDeleteThanks I am the talented hopeless poet :p
metallic-kitty:
Welcome in my blog and thanks :D
Nasra:
That is so sweet of you to say :D
Thank you for your support and for the additional 3 comments :P
Mother Courage:
I do believe yeah! And I miss me too :P
PiNK-y:
ReplyDeleteWelcome in my blog and I hope that you liked the other poems ;)
wow! this was gr8!
ReplyDeletei was missin a Lot for i just found ur blog !
keep on writin bro,
good luck :)
oh, & very interesting blog, so enjoyable :)
Voluble_grl:
ReplyDeleteAnd I was lucky that you ended up landing in my humble blog ;)
Thanks for the nice words :)
Lukcy her
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