tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9804631.post3328164068431997522..comments2023-11-02T10:56:51.810+03:00Comments on ..:..Hopeless Rhymes..:..: Broken TalesHopeless Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07182541702433244348noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9804631.post-24550015715724838732010-02-06T16:39:03.459+03:002010-02-06T16:39:03.459+03:00Hi. I just stumbled on your blog completely random...Hi. I just stumbled on your blog completely randomly. I've never seen anyone write with a rhyming system like this before, its a very original idea. I like how it feels disjointed until you get half way, and then it all starts to fall in place and feel familiar as you work your way backwards through the rhyme system to the end.Gallic gallimaufryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04850252803957943665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9804631.post-17827800408288083692009-11-25T12:51:36.387+03:002009-11-25T12:51:36.387+03:00Wow, you're so talented Mashalla!
I wonder how...Wow, you're so talented Mashalla!<br />I wonder how come I haven't seen your blog before!<br />Beautifully written.Kazehhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11933001445751306571noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9804631.post-50691586865834553822009-11-25T03:06:58.861+03:002009-11-25T03:06:58.861+03:00Awww. That is seriously one of the best things I&#...Awww. That is seriously one of the best things I've read in a while. :)Poker Facehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13402315954527309088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9804631.post-4485222641247488062009-11-21T11:24:38.292+03:002009-11-21T11:24:38.292+03:00looool
I got the notification that you sent me an...looool<br /><br />I got the notification that you sent me an email the instant you did but I didn't wanna interrupt the song lol<br /><br />ThanksHis Sweethearthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03871251441021987469noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9804631.post-72129447123853871732009-11-21T11:17:45.913+03:002009-11-21T11:17:45.913+03:00His Sweetheart:
Oh that is so sweet of you! Thank ...His Sweetheart:<br />Oh that is so sweet of you! Thank you :D<br /><br />You can find the list here:<br />http://www.mixpod.com/playlist/33417378Hopeless Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07182541702433244348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9804631.post-78352126850239457812009-11-21T11:11:21.388+03:002009-11-21T11:11:21.388+03:00First of all, let me tell you this
I have stayed ...First of all, let me tell you this<br /><br />I have stayed for like 20 minutes before writing this comment merely listening to your songs selection!!<br /><br />I really loved them all, totally my type!!!<br /><br />Love your poem too! Very sensational!<br /><br />P.S. May I please have te names of your songs?His Sweethearthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03871251441021987469noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9804631.post-742066541752865852009-11-16T21:46:40.012+03:002009-11-16T21:46:40.012+03:00msha3erha:
Thank you :D
I have tried to do that bu...msha3erha:<br />Thank you :D<br />I have tried to do that but it didn't make much sense to me lol<br /><br />Reading it the way I wrote is the way it was intended to be read :)<br /><br />MuSe:<br />Maybe beautiful but the meaning is not there I guess and it was not meant to be read the other way :)<br /><br />And if I am going with the same rate now, you will read new ones after 2 years :D No I am kidding! I started writing again and hopefully I will be able to finish some!Hopeless Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07182541702433244348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9804631.post-74533767625259145152009-11-16T21:00:55.592+03:002009-11-16T21:00:55.592+03:00very beautiful, i read it both ways and they are b...very beautiful, i read it both ways and they are beautiful both ways :) <br /><br />keep up the good work , i want to read something new from you :)Wafahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01533307419295995833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9804631.post-56918801552537483842009-11-16T09:53:34.558+03:002009-11-16T09:53:34.558+03:00Brilliant rhyme :D
You've wrote it differently...Brilliant rhyme :D<br />You've wrote it differently, so I tried to read it differently too<br /><br />I start with the first line then go directly to the last line. Then the second line followed by the one before the last ;) It worked with meaning until I reached the most final two lines ;) the sense was screwed lol<br /><br />Of coarse reading lines consecutively is way meaningful just like you did created it<br />Amazing :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com