tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9804631.post112301618751577456..comments2023-11-02T10:56:51.810+03:00Comments on ..:..Hopeless Rhymes..:..: The NightHopeless Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07182541702433244348noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9804631.post-1124340597644392362005-08-18T07:49:00.000+03:002005-08-18T07:49:00.000+03:00Meeshosaur:Thanks for your sweet comment and glad ...Meeshosaur:<BR/>Thanks for your sweet comment and glad you managed to understand it :DHopeless Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07182541702433244348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9804631.post-1123988261262364862005-08-14T05:57:00.000+03:002005-08-14T05:57:00.000+03:00Samboosa:Thank you very much for the nice comment ...Samboosa:<BR/>Thank you very much for the nice comment and welcome in my blog :DHopeless Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07182541702433244348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9804631.post-1123799622509663072005-08-12T01:33:00.000+03:002005-08-12T01:33:00.000+03:00Anonymous:Thanks for the A professor :D It makes m...Anonymous:<BR/>Thanks for the A professor :D It makes me happy since I was a B+ student in my college days :P<BR/>So why don't you show us your poems or your writings so we can learn from you? You seem to be well familiar with the English language and literature. So who is your favorite rock bands? :P<BR/>And no I don't write poems for a living, I have a real job ..thanks for your concern ;)<BR/>So you are just a visitor here or a bloggr in disguise?<BR/>Oh and thanks for complimenting my choice of the blog title, glad you liked it ;)<BR/><BR/>Peach: <BR/>Thanks :D and I hope that anonymous understands though I doubt he or she has some feelings :P<BR/><BR/>June:<BR/>Thanks but imagine you are having a normal conversation with your husband, would you go and use some words that are being rarely used in day to day conversations?<BR/><BR/>jawaher:<BR/>Thanks for your support and reply to anonymous :D<BR/><BR/>Hope:<BR/>Thnaks and I hope this anonymous show us some of his creative poetry and writing so we can all learn :D<BR/><BR/>SoSo:<BR/>Welcome in :D<BR/>Some look like an angels when they sleep ;)<BR/>Well as for the vocabulary, I made that clear in my reply to June.<BR/><BR/>And I don't mind being criticized at all so you are welcome any time ;)Hopeless Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07182541702433244348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9804631.post-1123797806918693592005-08-12T01:03:00.000+03:002005-08-12T01:03:00.000+03:00Sorry people for the delay in responding to the co...Sorry people for the delay in responding to the comments since I am currently in another country :D<BR/><BR/>Ancient:<BR/>I hope you get that soon :D<BR/><BR/>Flamingoliya:<BR/>You have to ask my father 1st :$ :P<BR/><BR/>.:A:.<BR/>Thanks for passing by and for the nice comment and I will save the thought :)<BR/><BR/>Najah:<BR/>No I don't think I will fall asleep and maybe I will be writing a poem about her ;)<BR/>The train is still at the station, I am sure :P<BR/><BR/>DayDreamer:<BR/>Thank you for the nice comment and I hope I treat her the way I am planning to do ;)<BR/><BR/>Peach:<BR/>First time someone call me marshmello heart :P<BR/>I agree with you so I can say it took about half the time the births take which is not bad :PHopeless Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07182541702433244348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9804631.post-1123374915008189892005-08-07T03:35:00.000+03:002005-08-07T03:35:00.000+03:00Anonymous, your so...so...I dont like you!! you sh...Anonymous, your so...so...I dont like you!! you should take your idiotic comments elsewhere!!<BR/><BR/>we ALL love Hopeless Poet's poetry and you think your so good at writing poetry than have you own stupid blog! you sad sad man!Hopehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00966794311559960047noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9804631.post-1123354990522316462005-08-06T22:03:00.000+03:002005-08-06T22:03:00.000+03:00hey anonymous this is really harsh and rude...i do...hey anonymous this is really harsh and rude...i don't think that u read ot taste poetry , cos the person who love poetry can't use this way of impolite critique ....and u have 2 know that we all here like the way hopeless use 2 write his wounderful poems and what u wrote about him is nothing and will not change our opinion about him ...so please don't write any silly comments here cos we don't want 2 waste our time reading ur stupid criticism and let me tell u sth ..u also need some one to advise u, so take my advice ( go and learn how 2 criticize people especially creative people like hopeless, then read this wounderful post again)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9804631.post-1123310412436132882005-08-06T09:40:00.000+03:002005-08-06T09:40:00.000+03:00gee that's harsh! ;\ If you don't like the words w...gee that's harsh! ;\ <BR/><BR/>If you don't like the words well, I think poetry isn't ultimatly about words! If it's any form of art at all then it's more about feelings. And the abundance of feelings in "The Night" is beauty!Peachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11818117686963358459noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9804631.post-1123201061836888562005-08-05T03:17:00.000+03:002005-08-05T03:17:00.000+03:00Oh and congrats on your choice of title for your b...Oh and congrats on your choice of title for your blog. Hopeless rhymes they are, no doubt about that.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9804631.post-1123200811188729812005-08-05T03:13:00.000+03:002005-08-05T03:13:00.000+03:00You get an A for effort... end result is not that ...You get an A for effort... end result is not that great, though. This is not a poem. This is usual talk that brings absolutely nothing to the literary world. Not one idea that's close to being original. I've listened to rock ballads that are more expressive. Sorry to burst your bubble, but somebody has to tell you the truth. I sincerely hope that's not what you do for a living. As to all of you commenting bloggers who stand in awe and praise, you either have no idea what you're talking about, OR, and that's even worse, you're misleading someone onto thinking they actually created something worth while. Why don't you skim through Yeats, kipling, Cummings, and get a sense of what poetry is all about.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9804631.post-1123141995199017142005-08-04T10:53:00.000+03:002005-08-04T10:53:00.000+03:00by the way .. about taking a long time to write th...by the way .. about taking a long time to write this poem .. All great things take time.. Even birth takes at least 10 months from conception to the baby's wail .. so if you look at it this way .. I think u didn't take much time at all .. cuz it was great & it was worth it ;)Peachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11818117686963358459noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9804631.post-1123141845786225692005-08-04T10:50:00.000+03:002005-08-04T10:50:00.000+03:00Aw HoplessP, your such a marshmello heart ;) I lov...Aw HoplessP, your such a marshmello heart ;) I love it!Peachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11818117686963358459noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9804631.post-1123099738602301012005-08-03T23:08:00.000+03:002005-08-03T23:08:00.000+03:00mashallah this is awsome but wont you fall asleep ...mashallah this is awsome but wont you fall asleep as well, i mean the whole night just staring, hmmm will u do something else beside starrrring? <BR/><BR/>Lucky her mashallah and move fast, the train the train TP... You need to be in Gear four..........Najahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05851169328099988912noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9804631.post-1123072042131407372005-08-03T15:27:00.000+03:002005-08-03T15:27:00.000+03:00Came here highly recommended by 'jawaher' who left...Came here highly recommended by 'jawaher' who left this link on my blog.<BR/><BR/>Nice poem and an even nicer thought. Save it and keep it for sure!<BR/><BR/>:-). : A : .https://www.blogger.com/profile/04410256917258728976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9804631.post-1123057803208170202005-08-03T11:30:00.000+03:002005-08-03T11:30:00.000+03:00will you marry me?will you marry me?Flamingoliyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16803909070601082998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9804631.post-1123035842344037222005-08-03T05:24:00.000+03:002005-08-03T05:24:00.000+03:00Ya Allah..Awesome!I'm just speechless and...I want...Ya Allah..Awesome!<BR/><BR/>I'm just speechless and...<BR/><BR/>I want that :(Ancient Poemhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06616485348884006314noreply@blogger.com